Knight Lights Ch1
on July 14, 2025
at 2:59 pm
I actually finished the arc this time 🙂 Hope you guys liked it. So far got 8 pages done for the next arc so it will continue for at least a little longer 😉
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Welcome back Olwen, Always like the tattoos
I like the updated look. The original ended too quickly to get a real feel for it so I’m interested in where this goes.
well at 15 pages I’ve already managed to outlast the original 😀
I got a lot of stories jotted down to tell so hopefully I can keep motivated to draw it and people can be motivated to read it
Why does she look like she’s about to spit in her sister’s mouth in that last panel?
Sisters being sisters I guess. Was going more for her making a face at her and the sister messing with her cheek squeezing her face all lovey dovey.
It doesn’t scan well at all there’s a bunch of wasted space in the third panel where you have a bunch of word bubbles. You could have worked on the layout more and had your intention come across better.
Got to establish the room a bit from time to time, and establish that the guys went outside.
Sounds like a plan and could work in the future for anal virginity too.
Seems like you skipped a bunch of pages of story here like they were talking and then all of the sudden dogman dick jump scare like I get the temptation to skip straight to the good part but this is jarring
Jump scare is apt, that was the intended goal, to make it feel very abrupt and put you into Olwen’s shoes where she still is processing things and sorta being taken by the waves out to sea before she really even decided to get into the water.
Important bits are there, how the boys feel about it will be hopefully carried by their reactions watching but they are more of an afterthought here and won’t get a lot of development till later chapters when the story will set out to quantify their relationships.
Scene is looking really good so far
I really like the comic so far. Especially the coloring
Wasn’t expecting the anatomy lesson
Oh neat you hung a lampshade on the sudden anatomy lesson that artfully breaks up the flow of the scene ha ha. Very good 4th wall breaking, the kind of story telling instincts that rank right up there with the best of modern marvel movie directors, lol good job. You could probably make a great Blood Rayne movie.
The rule I live by, “could this be someone’s fetish” If the answer is yeah then I try to give it a page. You may think it breaks up the flow and that’s fine but someone out there appreciates having an anatomy lesson about how this world differs from our own. Maybe the next one will be aimed at you but can’t win em all.
The way you formated this it looks like Rufel is a squashed offspring of a bootleg Labubu and one of those fat toad things. It’s kinda funny but a weird choice. Kinda distracting from the rest of the page
Well I am not sure what you mean by the formatting making him looked squashed but as for drawing him in general, that has been my biggest challenge and why when I tried making this comic 4 years ago I gave up only like 10 pages in. I am currently 32 done for this version so already tripled the length, and next arc will be a tentacle monster so that is a lot easier to draw than a Furry Wolf Man.
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Oh damn I totally see it now, didn’t notice that while drawing. Lol
I honestly don’t know how you couldn’t see that. It’s practically a quarter of the page, and the tangents that blend his body into his head are almost perfect straight lines. Makes him look so derpy.
Man seeing squashed toad Rufel is kinda like one of those magic eye things where once you see it you can’t unsee it. And now I’m seeing weird blended panels everywhere. The top two panels it looks like her right ass cheek grew a mouth and teeth and must scream and the bottom panel is just a jumbled mess. It’s almost got an AI jank character to it.
she’s the avatar
Hope this isn’t the last of ruffels or beastmen. Would love to see olwen take a giant cumshot like that in the mouth
Not sure if Rufel will make any appearance later but do have an idea for her gangbanged by molemen, though have no idea if will ever get that far in the story
Well now that it’s all wrapped up I can say this is probably my favorite sex scene that you have done.
well then, GOOD NEWS, not quite wrapped up 😉 still got a couple pages in the arc.
Hopefully you will enjoy the sex scene from arc 2 just as much. Haven’t gotten to it yet because been more focused on Zoe but gunna be a big tentacle sex scene.
Somehow I can imagine an emergency scenario with the guys and Olwen get stranded on an island and they lost all gadgets to signalize they need help.
Which leaves only *one* option …
Beach Party?
Sort of.
Though, I cannot imagine how Olwen could manage to morse-code S-O-S.
learn to control the lighting up so can blink it like they did on boats back in the day 😀